Hawaiian Renewal (1/21/2020)

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(written for an upcoming trip to Hawaii with my wife for our 5th anniversary)

IN MAY, WE FLY
U AND I
2 OAHU
IN LOVE
WITH A BEACH
SANDY STREET 
BOILED POI
UKE BEING SOLD
FIRE PIT
RICE WET
DEWY ORCHID
YOU WILL SMELL A SWEET ISLAND RAIN
TO SLURP BOBAS
O, IT'S MY JOY, LOVE!



Starting with letter 1: every 8th letter                   [Forwards]     
Starting with 5th to last letter: every 8th letter   [Backwards]  

IN MAY, WE FLY
U AND I
2 OAHU
IN LOVE
WITH A BEACH
SANDY STREET 
BOILED POI
UKE BEING SOLD
FIRE PIT
RICE WET
DEWY ORCHID
YOU WILL SMELL A SWEET ISLAND RAIN
TO SLURP BOBAS
O, IT'S MY JOY, LOVE!

Subtext 1 [Forwards]:
I LOVE YOU
SPECIAL TO ME

Subtext 2 [Backwards]:
YOU'RE MY 
WIFE
DESTINY

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